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06 February 2008 @ 03:32 pm
A very different type of poem  
broken language (which way?)

Hey you,
over there
Can you do me a favor?
Yes, you
Can you give this to him?
to that guy over there?
Do this for me
and things will be okay
got it?
okay
so do I
good

So which way do we go now,
Daybird?
So how was your day,
Daybird?

Hey,
come here
If I hold my arms out like this,
will you just go into them for a while
Can you do that for me?
I'd really appreciate it
Thanks
this is really nice
how about you?
you good?
that's nice

So which way do we go now,
Daybird?
So how was your day,
Daybird?

You know
sometimes
I don't know what to do
Can you always help me out with that?
you can? really?
wow, I can't believe it!
okay, so what do we do now, then?
okay, that's good.
I like that
do you?
that's even better

So which way do we go now,
Daybird?
So how was your day,
Daybird? (I honestly want to know)

Psst!
What are you doing right now?
ha ha!
You know, if the rest of my life
were just like this
it would be a great life
Do you know that?
What do you think?
okay then
that's good
I like that
So let's go home now then, okay.
 
 
 
Eilish Whelaneilisheyes on February 6th, 2008 10:05 pm (UTC)
I can hear Miranda July reading something like this :)
I'll call you when I'm done.
(Anonymous) on February 6th, 2008 10:30 pm (UTC)
Yea, this stanza especially reminded me of her

Hey,
come here
If I hold my arms out like this,
will you just go into them for a while
Can you do that for me?
I'd really appreciate it
Thanks
this is really nice
how about you?
you good?
that's nice
Reckyreimagination on February 6th, 2008 10:30 pm (UTC)
That was me by the way. Forgot to log in